This is the beginning of a song im writing. is it any good (im a 14 year old writer)?

They built you up high, outstretched your hands into the sky; made you feel invincible (invincible). But anything that can rise eventually falls to the floor, it’s the hardest transition. You swallowed yourself and you trusted them blindly, set them up to take everything (everything). You’re a hollow shell, a shadow of a dream; it’s just what they want you to be. Looking back their words never made sense, they STILL ECHO IN YOUR HEAD!