What do you think of the first part of my story?

It was okay. It has the potential to be interesting, but the grammatical errors, especially in the first paragraph, kind of turned me away from the story. You use words more than twice in some sentences too. Reread this over and try to make your thoughts and pictures flow better together. Why would Urie blush? That doesn't make sense to me. Also, possibly instead of telling us the other tribes hear the same prophecy, have Urie wake up and have the news spread of the other tribes hearing the same one.